The primary PDF is the actual piece, the other is a
document that will help the performer understand this
piece. I would also like to note that this piece can be
broken up into many; wherever there is a solid barline
is a break-point.
The suggestion that it can be broken into many rondos makes the piece more appealing. Before it was just tooooooooooooo long . . . I like the very first section and the last the best.
I created Aumentare lo Slancio rondo form, and am the first to compose in it, not traditional rondo form! As to length, to some extent I agree. The parts could be a little (or a lot! :-) shorter, and a little more interesting. It was my first try though, and I trust I will improve over time. Trusting in Jesus Christ, The Disguised Novice
This is a very good piece for someone your age who obviously hasn't been composing for years. You are surely better than I was when I started almost seven years ago. However, this piece lacks many little things. First of all, you are far from being the first to write in rondo form. Many classical composers wrote pieces in rondo form, and songs are basically the same. A rondo is like chorus, verse, chorus, lyrics, etc. Writing a rondo in aumentare io slancio form is much harder than writing a traditional rondo, for it really has to keep the ear attentive without becoming boring. I think it's what your rondo lacks the most. It becomes much too redundant. I think that around 100 bars would have been enough. Now you offer us almost 600! Quality prevails over quantity young man, and concision is sometimes the thing to do in order to keep our fans! Nowadays people like shorter songs in general. That being said, good continuance! Come hear and see my music if you want! Cheers,
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